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guv love gene
Title: You're The Boss
Fandom: Life on Mars
Pairing: Gene/Annie, Sam/Annie
Rating: NC17
Wordcount: 100
Notes: Drabble-a-Day 2011. Day 255. Prompt from lifein1973 Weekly Drabble Challenge #149-Bad, Bad Thing. Unbeta'd. Comments and concrit welcome.
WARNINGS: Spanking. Verbal abuse. Rough sex.
Summary: Sam would understand, but that's not what Annie needs.



“You’ve been a very naughty girl, haven’t you, Cartwright?”

“Yes, Guv.”

“And what happens to naughty girls?

“They get punished.

Annie could barely contain the trembling that went through her body; the excitement at having her deepest fantasy fulfilled, even if it meant cheating on Sam. That was half the thrill right there.

She knew she could tell Sam what she wanted and he’d do it, but he’d still be nice. When Gene put her over his knee, spanked her bottom and fucked her raw, it was because he understood exactly how bad she really was.

Not nice at all.

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damigella_314
Sep. 13th, 2011 06:15 am (UTC)
It's good to know Annie gets what she needs (and if Sam's so nice, he or she won't mind).
I, on the other hand, miss inverted commas at the end of two sentences :). Commenting, like knitting, should not be attempted before coffee.
joanne_c
Sep. 13th, 2011 07:18 am (UTC)
That's Sam in my icon :)

I think he'd want to join in myself.
damigella_314
Sep. 13th, 2011 06:30 pm (UTC)
Joining in seems like an awesome idea. kgal? Are you listening here or do we have to go and write this as a prompt?
Hope you don't mind the fact I comment a fandom I know nothing about, but I so much like our host's writing that I just read whatever she feels like writing.
karaokegal
Sep. 13th, 2011 09:38 pm (UTC)
I'm always listening. But a note to the main prompt post wouldn't hurt in case of swiss-cheese brain.
damigella_314
Sep. 14th, 2011 04:52 pm (UTC)
Done. Chisbren, I haz it.
joanne_c
Sep. 13th, 2011 07:19 am (UTC)
I love it. Hot, sexy and completely IC.

I'm biased, I admit - my first LOM story was a Gene/Annie pegging story.
karaokegal
Sep. 13th, 2011 09:39 pm (UTC)
As obvious as Sam/Gene is, and I do ship it, I'm so much more attracted to the rare-pairs in the LOM/A2A verse and I think Gene/Annie has a lot of potential. Pegging? Mmmmmmm.
joanne_c
Sep. 14th, 2011 12:49 pm (UTC)
Sam/Gene is obvious and amazing but I think after a while, the rarer pairings in a fandom with a big pairing can often provide more interesting ideas and dynamics in general. I have always thought Gene/Annie could be interesting, not only through writing it, because I don't think Annie would let Gene get away with his... erm... Gene-ness in a lot of ways. Not unrealistically but in the sense of "you act like that, I'm putting on my clothes and going home," and meaning every word - and doing it if he doesn't stop.
karaokegal
Sep. 15th, 2011 05:31 pm (UTC)
I wish some of the Sam/Gene hard-core shippers could see the awesomeness that is Annie. It's not as bad as the female hate in some of the other fandoms, but I think she is seriously under-appreciated to put it mildly.
ebineez01
Sep. 14th, 2011 11:58 am (UTC)
As much as Annie will always seem to abhor the crassness that is Gene Hunt - I reckon she'd go for the Gene Genie. Nice

Edited at 2011-09-14 11:59 am (UTC)
karaokegal
Sep. 15th, 2011 05:30 pm (UTC)
There's something SO primal about him.
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